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(Frage) beantwortet  | | Datum: | 10:17 Do 10.11.2005 | | Autor: | suzan |
Hallöchen zusammen,
ich soll einen text schreiben über ein schönes erlebnis in meinem leben.
ich schreibe ihn erst auf deutsch und dann auf englisch.
wäre leb wenn das jemand korregieren könnte.
ok also
Mein schönstes Erlebnis in meinem Leben ist meine Tochter Cecile.
Die ersten vier Monate meiner Schwangerschaft waren nicht so gut, weil mir ständig schlecht war, ich mich übergeben musste und ich immer umgekippt bin.
Ich konnte nirgendwo alleine hinfahren, weil immer die Angst da war, dass mir etwas passiert.
Zudem kommt noch, dass ich ziemliche Rückenprobleme bekommen habe und sehr viel Wasser in den Beinen hatte.
Nach diesen vier Monaten ging es mir recht gut und ich habe auf jeden fall für zwei gegessen.
Vor allem Eis.
Da konnte mich keiner schlagen, dass war ruckzuck weg und es waren ziemlich große Portionen.
Ich fand es richtig schön zu sehen wie der Bauch immer größer wurde und ich nicht mehr in meine Hosen passte.
Als ich dann die ersten schwachen Bewegungen im Bauch spürte, dachte ich zuerst ich bekomme Blähungen.
Aber dem war nicht so, meine kleine Tochter hat sich bewegt.
Diese Bewegungen waren das schönste Gefühl, welches man nicht beschreiben kann.
Als diese Bewegungen von ihr immer stärker wurden, konnte man sehen wo sie gerade hintrat.
Und wenn sie sich gedreht hatte, sah man richtig wo sie mit dem Hintern lag.
Die eine Seite vom Bauch war total flach und die andere Seite war hoch und hart.
Als ich dann wieder zum Arzt ging und er mir sagte, dass ich ein Mädchen bekomme, war ich sehr glücklich.
Ich hatte mir ein Mädchen gewünscht.
Natürlich wäre ich auch glücklich gewesen, wenn ich einen Jungen bekommen hätte.
Hauptsache gesund.
Als sich die Schwangerschaft dem Ende zuneigte, hatte ich schon etwas Angst bekommen, da ich nicht wußte was auf mich zukam.
Die Fruchtblase ist Nachts geplatzt und die Wehen traten ein.
Als wir dann im Krankenhaus angekommen waren, hat es noch etwas gedauert bis ich in den Kreissaal kam.
Ich habe mir eine Spritze geben lassen, damit ich die Schmerzen nicht so doll spüre, aber als die Presswehen eingetreten sind, habe ich alles gemerkt und es tat sehr weh.
Aber als ich Cecile dann in meinen Armen halten konnte, war der Schmerz vergessen und ich war sehr glücklich sie endlich zu haben.
Das war mein schönstes Erlebnis und ist es immer noch.
nun auf englisch.
My most beautyful experience in my life is my daughter Cecile.
The first four months from my pregnancy wasn't good, because me was bad, I had vomit and I was already tip over.
I couldn't drive nowhere alone, because it was already there the fear, that me some transpired.
Furthermore I had quite back problems and very much water in the legs.
After this four months I felt me good and I had at any rate ate for two.
Above all ice-cream.
That couldn't me none struck, that was fast away and it was very big portions.
I found it really beautiful to see that the belly was bigger and bigger and I don't suitable in my trousers.
As I felt the first motions in my belly, at first I think I get flatulence.
But that wasn't so, my little daughter has been motion.
This motions was the beautiful sense, that couldn't describe.
As this motions was always faster, you could see where she trod.
And when she turned around, you could see where she lay with her butt.
The once site from my belly was flat and the other site from my belly was big and hard.
As I gone to my doctor and he me said that I get a girl I was very happy.
I had wished me a girl.
Of course I was happy when I get a boy too.
Main thing well.
As came the end of the pregnancy, I had fear, then I don't know what came up to me.
The amniotic sac was burst at night and the contractions was started.
As we arrived the hospitle, it has lasted until I came into the delivery room.
I had gave me a shot, that I feel don't the pangs, but the bearing down pains had I noticed.
But as I could Cecile hold in my arms, the pangs was forgotten and I was very happy she to have.
That was my most beautiful experience and it is still.
ist das so ok?
lg suzan
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(Antwort) fertig  | | Datum: | 17:55 Do 10.11.2005 | | Autor: | Adriana |
Erstmals Herzlichen Glückwunsch! :D
nun aber zum Englishen...
My most beautiful experience in my life is my daughter Cecile.
The first four months from my pregnancy werent good because I was sick. I vomited and I tipped over.
I couldn't drive anywhere alone, because the fear that something would happen to me was always present.
On top of that I also got back problems and had a lot of water in my legs.
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After these four months I started to feel better and defiantly ate enough for two.
Especially ice cream.
No one could have beaten me in that respect. The food just vanished and they were rather large portions.
I really enjoyed watching how my stomach got bigger and bigger and how I didnt fit in my trousers anymore.
When I felt the first slight movements in my stomach I first thought that it was do to flatulence. Only that wasnt the case. My little daughter had caused it.
These movements were the nicest feeling that one simply cannot describe.
All these movements inside of me that got stronger. One could see where she was kicking.
And when she turned one could really see where her bottom was.
The one side of the stomach was totally flat while the other was big and hard.
When I then went to the doctor again and he told me that I was to receive a girl, I was very happy.
I had been hoping for a girl.
Of course I would have been happy if I had received a boy.
The main thing is for the child to be healthy.
When I was close to the end of my pregnancy I started to get a little scared since I didnt know what was awaiting me.
The amniotic sac burst at night and the contractions started.
When we arrived at the hospital, it took some time till I came into the delivery room.
I allowed a shot to be given to me as to not feel the pain. Only when the bearing down pains started I was fully conscious of the pain and it hurt a lot.
But when I held Cecile in my arms the pains were forgotten and I was very happy to finally have her.
That was my most beautiful experience and it is still.
(Bemerkung: ab --- habe ich nicht deine Version verbessert, sondern den Deutschentext direkt übersetzt.)
mfg
Adriana
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 19:21 Do 10.11.2005 | | Autor: | Mysterya |
Hallo Suzan,
Also da hast Du Dir wirklich kein leichtes Thema ausgesucht und ich habe im übrigen nirgendwo gefunden was Fruchtblase heißt, aber auch dein Ausdruck stand nicht in meinem einsprachigen Wörterbuch. Naja egal. Erstmal zu deinem Text. Ich kann jetzt nicht auf jede Wendung eingehen, aber mir ist aufgefallen, dass Du oft krampfhaft versucht hast Sachen so in Englisch zu sagen wie du sie mal locker auf Deutsch umgangssprachlcih sagst. Diese umgangsprachlichen deutschen Wendungen gibt es im Englischen so einfach nicht und wenn man sie Wort für Wort übersetzt, sind sie im Englischen alles mögliche - nur nicht richtig ! Versuche demnächst einfach mal etwas anders und weniger umgangssprachlich zu sagen, wenn Du merkst, dass es dafür keine Englische Wendung gibt. Ich musste also sehr oft vielles umformulieren oder anders ausdrücken, weil man das so wie man es auf Deutsch sagt Englisch eben nicht sagen kann. Und noch ein paar Tipps von Fehlern die Du häufig machst.
1. Achte auf die Reihenfolge der Wörter. Substantiv + Prädikat + Objekt > I feel bad und niemals nimmt man da statt "I" "me". Me anstelle von I sagt man nur, wenn man sagen will "wie Ich" She feels as bad as me. Oder "Ich auch" Da sagt man "Me too".
2. Achte auf die Zeitformen. Du hast oft mehrere verschiedene in einem Satz oder zusammenhängende Sätze in verschiedenen Zeitformen. Achte auf do und do not, dass in der der Vergangenheit immer zu did (not) wird, wenn Du vorher die Vergangenheitsform nutzt.
3. Besorg Dir mal ein Wörterbuch wo viele Beispielsätze und Wendungen drin stehen. Da findest du die englischen Redewendungen, die du brauchst. z.B. I felt sick (Mir war schlecht) and I fainted ( Ich fiehl in Ohnmacht) to HAVE a baby/ girl (ein Kind bekommen)
4. Grammatik - die ist bei allem Respekt schrecklich O ich hab sicher auch Sachen, die ich mir nie merke, aber da musst du echt üben. Und nimm mal anstelle von As, wenn du WENN sagen willst lieber When. AS steht mehr für als und wird bei Vergleichen genutzt im Sinne von (so ... wie) She felt as bad as me.
Den Rest musst Du dir jetzt einfach selber anschauen. Und bitte schreib es nicht einfach nur ab, sondern überlege auch wieso ich das so gemacht habe. Wenn Du spezielle Fragen hast, frag einfach.
Mysterya
PS: Ich hoffe, dass ich keine groben Fehler gemacht habe. Wem was auffällt, möge doch bitte ergänzen.
The most beautyful experience in my life is my daughter Cecile.
The first four months of my pregnancy were not so good, because I felt sick and I even fainted.
I could not drive alone, because there was always the fear, that something bad could happen to me.
Furthermore I had pretty much problems with my back and very much water in my legs.
But after this four months I felt better and I certainly ate for two. Especially I liked ice-cream.
Nobody ever could defeat me in that, because I ate so fast and it were really big portions.
I found it very beautiful to see how the belly became bigger and bigger and I did not fit into my trousers anymore. When I felt the first movements in my belly I thought at first I got flatulence.
But I was wrong, my little daughter just moved.
This movements were such a beautiful feeling, one just can not describe it.
When the movements became more intensive, I was able to see where she kicked me.
And when she turned around, you could see where she was laying with her bottom. The one site from my belly was flat and the other site was big and hard.
When I went to the doctor and he told me that I would have a little girl I was very happy. It was my wish to have a girl. Of course I also would have been happy about a boy. The main thing is that it is healthy.
In the end of my pregnancy, I was a little bit afraid, because I did not know what would happen to me. The amniotic sac burst at night and the labour pains started.
When we arrived in the hospital it took a little time until I came into the delivery room.
I allowed the nurse to give me a shot in order not to feel the pain too much, but nevertheless I noticed the labour pains. But when I could hold Cecile in my arms I forgot all the pain and finally I was very happy to have her. That was my most beautiful experience and it still is.
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig | | Datum: | 20:08 Do 10.11.2005 | | Autor: | Adriana |
Hallo Mysterya!
Schön, dass Du Suzan ihre Fehler erklären könntest! In so was bin ich wohl etwas ungeschickt, aber ich habe es mit deinen versucht. Jetzt hoffe ich nur, dass ich keine weiteren Fehler gemacht habe!
Grüße
Adriana
The most beautiful experience in my life is my daughter Cecile.
The first four months of my pregnancy were not so good, because I felt sick and I even fainted.
I could not drive alone, because there was always the fear that something bad could happen to me.
Furthermore I had pretty many (its something you can count) problems with my back and very much water in my legs.
But after these (only use this if it is something you can point to) four months I felt better and I certainly ate for two. I especially liked ice-cream.
Nobody ever could defeat me in that, because I ate so fast and they (plural if you say this than you have to chance were to was) were really big portions.
I found it very beautiful (beautiful normally describes the looks of something. Wonderful would be more common in this sense but beautiful isnt wrong) to see how the belly became bigger and bigger and I did not fit into my trousers anymore. When I felt the first movements in my belly I thought at first that I got flatulence.
But I was wrong, my little daughter just moved.
These (plural) movements were such a beautiful feeling. One just can not describe it.
When the movements became more intensive, I was able to see where she kicked me.
And when she turned around, you could see where she was laying with her bottom. The one side (typo I think) of my belly was flat and the other side was big and hard.
When I went to the doctor and he told me that I would have a little girl I was very happy. It was my wish to have a girl. Of course I also would have been happy about a boy. The main thing is that it is healthy.
Close to (in the end würde danach bedeuten) the end of my pregnancy, I was a little bit afraid, because I did not know what would happen to me. The amniotic sac burst at night and the labour pains started.
When we arrived in the hospital it took a little time until I came into the delivery room.
I allowed the nurse to give me a shot in order not to feel the pain too much, but nevertheless I noticed the labour pains. But when I could hold Cecile in my arms I forgot all the pain and finally I was very happy to have her. That was my most beautiful experience and it still is.
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