Bitte Korrekturlesen < Korrekturlesen < Englisch < Sprachen < Vorhilfe
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(Frage) für Interessierte  | | Datum: | 12:44 So 25.10.2009 | | Autor: | MonaMoe |
Hallo,
könnte mir jemand diese Sätze bitte korrigieren.
Ich habe diese Frage in keinem anderen Forum gestellt.
The next day, Liv was very excited. She ran through the house, took things in hand, put it down again, ran from room to domain.What and how she should tell Lulu. Would she accept a new man in the house? `She is still so small and sensitive`, she thought. Lulu was sitting at the end of the hall and watched not only their mother, but especially the front door. It was just before seven and Lulu wondered if he was still to come. `Maybe he's mad at me because I have not told him or maybe he does not trust him.` said in her head even when the bell rang at the door. Liv looked into the mirror before she went to the door. A bouquet of red roses she laughed. She smiled. In the other hand, Peter gave a beautifully shaped lily a bit deeper. ` My favorite flower`called Lulu as she ran past her mother and jump into his arms. Her mother understood right away and after she imitated her daughter. A new family was born.
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(Mitteilung) Reaktion unnötig  | | Datum: | 13:03 So 25.10.2009 | | Autor: | Loddar |
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siehe Text hier
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